Success Criteria: I needed to use adjectives, metaphors, similes, alliteration, descriptive phrases and humour
The magic box
I will put in my box
A magical floating zoo,
a lion with a purple mane,
and macaroni cheese.
I will put in my box
A world of dreams,
a hard snail trail,
a slimy chocolate bar.
I will put in my box
An 100m swimming pool full of coke,
A massive white chocolate bar,
And a rainbow flavoured lollipop.
I will put in my box
Blood dripping on a sword,
An ice block the size of an ant,
And a neon orange alien.
My box is fashioned from soft white lace
and hard gold and solid silver
with me playing tennis on the lid
and light blue in the corners
its hinges are brand new and shiny
In my box i will take a swim in the deep
ocean and wash up in a wonderful place
on the beach!
By Phoebe