The magic box

WALT: use descriptive language in poetry.
Success Criteria: I needed to use adjectives, metaphors, similes, alliteration, descriptive phrases and humour 

The magic box

I will put in my box

A magical floating zoo,
a lion with a purple mane,
and macaroni cheese.

I will put in my box 

A world of dreams,
a hard snail trail,
a slimy chocolate bar.

I will put in my box

An 100m swimming pool full of coke,
A massive white chocolate bar,
And a rainbow flavoured lollipop.

I will put in my box 

Blood dripping on a sword,
An ice block the size of an ant,
And a neon orange alien.

My box is fashioned from soft white lace
and hard gold and solid silver
with me playing tennis on the lid  
and light blue in the corners 
its hinges are brand new and shiny

 In my box i will take a swim in the deep 
ocean and wash up in a wonderful place 
on the beach! 

By Phoebe