Wednesday, November 20, 2013

My magic box

WALT: use descriptive language in poetry.
Success Criteria: I needed to use adjectives, metaphors, similes, alliteration, descriptive phrases and humour

 I will put in my box..

A bright pink pig flying in the sky
Colourful harmless fluttering grass
Swaying green spiky butterflies

 I will put in my box..

Children laughing in pain
A purple roaring in agony
The sun setting at 9am and rising at 9pm

 I will put in my box..

A small panda eating a piece of poison packed bamboo
Extremely painful burps exiting penguins mouths
An upside down mural hanging on the sun

 I will put in my box..

A roasted pelican cooking on the barbecue
 Flying fish dropping out of the sky dying from no water
 A black firework disappearing into the dark dark sky

My box is fashioned from my own blood and guts and helpless animal tears with unique animals painted on the lid and shark fins in the corners. Its hinges are made from carved devil horns.

I shall enter my box to discover all the tortured animals. I shall ride on an elephant with a plastic heart charging through the lands.

Written by: Miranda

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