Thursday, July 11, 2013

Cooper's writing

Cooper is learning how to consistently use punctuation.

Glowing crystals.

One day a researcher was off to Mars. The count off started 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 blast off. Te rocket went but it lost control and crashed on Mars. The he found a dead person that had a map to find the crystals that will power his ship forever. He had to jump over lava miss trap doors and not fall in holes and other dangerous stuff. He almost died two times but he got the crystals and put them in his ship.

1 comment:

  1. cool story cooper very interesting dont forget to use more punctuation

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